Tuesday, February 14, 2012

Revised Sentences!

My hometown was a great place to grow up. All the girls had quite a conservative style. Mr.Bradley was Pittsburgh Steeler fan I ever had as a teacher. His room was covered in Steeler flags, jerseys, and posters!
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  1. HollyFebruary 23, 2012 at 7:19 AM

    You're giving a little bit more information here, but sentences don't give as clear an image as they might.

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